Tuesday 13 January 2009

Zilin's poem

Zinc is what I am full of
independent is me
Lively I will always be
intelligent may sometimes be me
nice is what I can be
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  1. PRIMARY 6G BLOG13 January 2009 at 07:59

    Nice poem but I think the line "independent is me" should be changed to "independent is always me". =)


    -Alicia

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